Monday, 8 April 2019

If I Had Wings Poem

For the past few weeks we have been doing poetry. This weeks task was a poem about If I Had Wings... First we had to answer some questions and then we had to colour in the piece of paper with the poem. Last of all we had to write our own If I Had Wings poem. We had to use sticky ( interesting ) language, use the five senses and use interesting verbs and nouns. Here is my poem. 
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  1. Anonymous11 April 2019 at 14:21

    Hi Noah. I enjoyed reading your poem with you. I liked you sense of imagination when you said, '... I would touch a rocket ship roaring through the sky. It was good to see you used the senses. Your next step is to use more adjectives next time.

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  2. Anonymous18 June 2019 at 11:22

    Hi Miss Ireland thank you for the comment. Next time I will use more adjectives.

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