Well done Noah! You have included some great information in there. It is a thoughtful critique. I really like the way you ended telling about the book by asking the viewer, "or did he?" That makes the viewer want to read it for themselves. Next time, it would be great to challenge yourself to look at the camera sometimes, especially after asking the viewer a question.
Well done Noah! You have included some great information in there. It is a thoughtful critique. I really like the way you ended telling about the book by asking the viewer, "or did he?" That makes the viewer want to read it for themselves. Next time, it would be great to challenge yourself to look at the camera sometimes, especially after asking the viewer a question.
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