Welcome to my blog, I'm a student at Karoro School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
Haiku
Blue ball is bouncing
He is running down the court
He shoots and he scores
Tanka
Rumbling of rough sea
People going mad
Sea coming straight towards us
We went dashing from the waves
Kia Ora Noah, in your Tanka you have said where you are in a descriptive way. It is cool to see some photos in here. I can't seem to find anything in this that might need working on.Ka Pai, Luken
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Kia Ora Noah, in your Tanka you have said where you are in a descriptive way. It is cool to see some photos in here. I can't seem to find anything in this that might need working on.
ReplyDeleteKa Pai, Luken