Friday, 17 August 2018

the beach

We are learning to use destriptive words in our writing. We are learning to make the reader think of the story we are thinking of the story.

5 comments:

  1. Hi Noah you have done good work with your writting keep it up. It is sad that the sea turtles are dying.

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  2. Hi Kayden thank you for commenting on my beach poem. I agree that it is sad that the sea turtles are dying.

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  3. Hi Noah my name is Luke from Karoro school It is sad that the sea turtles are dieing and that people can do something about it. Maybe if you want to look a my learning blog is at http://karorolukenr.blogspot.com

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  4. Hello Luken thank you for commenting on my beach clean up. I also think that it is sad that the sea turtles are dying.

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  5. Hi Noah good job on your work. It is good you and your class went to the beach and picked up some rubbish. It amazed me by how much rubbish you picked up. I really liked when you said I heard the waves crashing loudly against rocks and the sky looks like grey candyfloss. Good job. Phoebe.

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